tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1002113089297135210.post5646765858832366914..comments2023-11-16T20:34:36.744-06:00Comments on ... MICHAEL DI GESU ... ... ... In Time ... ...: SHE'S BACK .... Michael Di Gesuhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17047267262428143113noreply@blogger.comBlogger34125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1002113089297135210.post-91570137127767797752012-10-11T12:53:49.156-05:002012-10-11T12:53:49.156-05:00Michael,
It is like watching a 1940s movie in my h...Michael,<br />It is like watching a 1940s movie in my head. Your attention to detail is unsurpassed. I felt I was right there in the hotel. <br />I think it would amp things up if it was his son instead of the nephew, too. <br />I always love reading your writing. Susan Oloierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07311938400999953443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1002113089297135210.post-48981482912572560412012-10-11T09:50:33.222-05:002012-10-11T09:50:33.222-05:00Wonderful read... :)
Visit my blog--> A Happier...Wonderful read... :)<br />Visit my blog--> <a href="http://ourhappierlife.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">A Happier Life</a>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1002113089297135210.post-35285889819201815952012-10-11T09:03:20.021-05:002012-10-11T09:03:20.021-05:00Very film noir! And I love the Drake! :)Very film noir! And I love the Drake! :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1002113089297135210.post-55938923770181827032012-10-11T08:27:11.863-05:002012-10-11T08:27:11.863-05:00Hi Michael, there's lots of lovely description...Hi Michael, there's lots of lovely description here. I am intrigued, esepcially about the romantic aspect of this piece.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1002113089297135210.post-35259198490088036632012-10-11T04:02:42.756-05:002012-10-11T04:02:42.756-05:00I was drawn into the moment. I love the immediacy ...I was drawn into the moment. I love the immediacy of your writing... and great atmosphere too!Michelle Wallacehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02750092836481599870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1002113089297135210.post-48589625168432759312012-10-10T07:52:58.620-05:002012-10-10T07:52:58.620-05:00Ooh, very intriguing set up. What's going to h...Ooh, very intriguing set up. What's going to happen to this trio? Love your lush descriptions.Deniz Bevanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17134553551048836979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1002113089297135210.post-79237003067087273542012-10-09T16:12:22.754-05:002012-10-09T16:12:22.754-05:00This is the first time I ventured into this story,...This is the first time I ventured into this story, but I'm intrigued. Something tells me things are about to go down later on. :)David P. Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17259276981865439853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1002113089297135210.post-64573512781639693082012-10-09T16:05:12.099-05:002012-10-09T16:05:12.099-05:00Fascinating. If that's his secretary then I...Fascinating. If that's his secretary then I'm going with what Lady Gaga said about men and the number one thing she looks for "He's gotta have a big d*ck!" So yeah...there's a story there. You should give it to me long and uncut.Michael Offutt, Phantom Readerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10557969104886174930noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1002113089297135210.post-90691809128020968882012-10-09T15:49:43.441-05:002012-10-09T15:49:43.441-05:00Came back to read the rest of the comments... I th...Came back to read the rest of the comments... I think you've got to give the people what they want, Michael! :D Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15747144518868320969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1002113089297135210.post-57658550641377335802012-10-09T13:04:29.686-05:002012-10-09T13:04:29.686-05:00I need to know more... please tell me this is goin...I need to know more... please tell me this is going to be the novella you mentioned ?!Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03604785269958873474noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1002113089297135210.post-46157672405473971362012-10-09T02:37:00.193-05:002012-10-09T02:37:00.193-05:00You have got style and you know your characters. L...You have got style and you know your characters. Loved the surprise ending. Keep writing, I see a novel not far ahead :DAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14831956192459960019noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1002113089297135210.post-24401737221261468292012-10-08T19:10:30.677-05:002012-10-08T19:10:30.677-05:00What a wonderfully descriptive story! Fabulous!What a wonderfully descriptive story! Fabulous!Lynda R Young as Elle Cardyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09975442291393246148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1002113089297135210.post-91898779301686716342012-10-08T09:21:46.622-05:002012-10-08T09:21:46.622-05:00I'm certainly curious! I like your writing sty... I'm certainly curious! I like your writing style, it is very engaging. Is this from a book you will be writing?<br /><br /> Allons-yJackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04395502314886308773noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1002113089297135210.post-84136517588280661532012-10-07T22:56:24.246-05:002012-10-07T22:56:24.246-05:00Dear Michael,
What atmosphere! What suspense!
Gr...Dear Michael,<br /><br />What atmosphere! What suspense!<br /><br />Great descriptions, intriguing characters and a mystery!<br /> <br />But can you sustain this through a novel? That is the question. <br />Alfred Hitchcock always said that the audience could only stand just so much suspense and then needs a rest; a scene with comic relief.<br /><br />I think you have potential here, Michael. You've got me hooked. I'll read almost anything you write!<br /><br />Thank you for your kind words about my text. Please take pride in the fact that you have inspired my writing. I have left a comment about this on my post.<br /><br />I am so glad that you have been able to participate in RFW for 'Birthday Madness'. I hope you will be able to post something for next time too, for Halloween, which will be the last time before RFW takes a break in November.<br /><br />I notice that you are following me on Friend Connect. Thank you for doing this. I lost over a hundred followers when I had to change blog address because of a virus-attack in January 2012.<br /><br />Hope you have a wonderful two weeks until next time!<br /><br />Best wishes,<br />Anna<br />For the benefit of other readers:<br /><a href="http://annas-adornments.blogspot.se/2012/10/birthday-madness.html" rel="nofollow">RFW No. 46 - 'Birthday Madness'</a>Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17926688000745346961noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1002113089297135210.post-53999877683911281262012-10-07T16:24:18.790-05:002012-10-07T16:24:18.790-05:00Seems like you've found a niche here with the ...Seems like you've found a niche here with the romance stuff, cheers!Danettehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15043881305977386629noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1002113089297135210.post-56020720732111946802012-10-07T05:14:28.518-05:002012-10-07T05:14:28.518-05:00Michael, you really have a knack for describing ev...Michael, you really have a knack for describing events, characters, setting and everything else so well. I could almost see this in pictures and that's what made it even more intriguing. Wonder what happens next? Annehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15640511681168230116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1002113089297135210.post-49658272020348621962012-10-06T22:16:14.626-05:002012-10-06T22:16:14.626-05:00Ooh, Michael, this sensual style so suits you. I t...Ooh, Michael, this sensual style so suits you. I think you are finding new ways to write, becoming more literary. Love it. Love the rich descriptions, love the emotions, love the mystery at the end. This story isn't over yet. Do I see a novella coming on? Denise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1002113089297135210.post-85296316176035087062012-10-06T22:05:44.768-05:002012-10-06T22:05:44.768-05:00I wanted more more more. I love the way you descri...I wanted more more more. I love the way you describe the Drake. I as right there with Uncle and his arm candy. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04443736284850057306noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1002113089297135210.post-48884925296422601302012-10-06T17:08:00.833-05:002012-10-06T17:08:00.833-05:00Excellent description. I think the real story act...Excellent description. I think the real story actually starts at the twisty end.Raelene Purtillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09316816228739648286noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1002113089297135210.post-23321623543760226302012-10-06T15:44:14.808-05:002012-10-06T15:44:14.808-05:00Hey my friend! I always love reading your dialogue...Hey my friend! I always love reading your dialogue. It is so real! As if I'm listening in on the conversation. Ahhh. But I am though, aren't I? Your description is awesome too. I'm definitely intrigued. :-)Robyn Campbellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17356555082768185840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1002113089297135210.post-12623115682228419732012-10-06T14:18:55.773-05:002012-10-06T14:18:55.773-05:00Talk about October birthdays, my daughter's is...Talk about October birthdays, my daughter's is on Halloween!Karen Jones Gowenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01153821980625034810noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1002113089297135210.post-79077699852695213962012-10-06T12:30:13.253-05:002012-10-06T12:30:13.253-05:00as a supporter of PETA I'm here to spray that ...as a supporter of PETA I'm here to spray that mink wearing woman with some oily red paint!<br /><br />Nice story, Mikey! <br />Hope you're having a very naughty weekend :) DEZMONDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14127166104359407763noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1002113089297135210.post-51999581595860821542012-10-06T10:23:59.163-05:002012-10-06T10:23:59.163-05:00Mystery, intrigue, and Noir ... great combo. Love ...Mystery, intrigue, and Noir ... great combo. Love your prose. You need to make this a novel. Roland D. Yeomanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00338410857990551352noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1002113089297135210.post-88707422513523996202012-10-06T09:38:48.308-05:002012-10-06T09:38:48.308-05:00I could really picture the scene, you describe thi...I could really picture the scene, you describe things so well. I just wonder in the first paragraph whether there is too much 'black' and in 'black limo' 'ebony mink stole' and 'black veil' although it does give an aura. I loved the piece and am looking foward to more with these characters. Sallyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14090018804016223955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1002113089297135210.post-53642093771202408862012-10-06T03:55:31.865-05:002012-10-06T03:55:31.865-05:00Intriguing indeed, look forward to more. Your des...Intriguing indeed, look forward to more. Your desciptions are deliciously atmospheric. Really enjoyed the excerpt.Nilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.com